Shadow Knight

Seemed to not flow. But other than that, not bad. Have i ever called anyone's work bad?

I wuickly Yep, Hunter was tired!

Another good job TBR, i think i spotted a grammar error in there, can't remember it though.

It's good TBR. No mistakes that hunter didn't find.

Nice TBR, you might want to make some parts longer.

Wow, i must have really bad taste in poetry then, i didn't mind this.

Wow you made lot's of improvments since i last read this.

I like this. Good job, and i understood it.

It's good, but i would suggest that Devon tells her about her boyfriends after a little more chatting, so to speak.

It's good. "I like you yet not like that" Put a comma in there "I like you, yet not like that"

Gruesome, yep i like it.

Meh, i agree that life cannot be summed up in 30 words. I wrote this a few years ago so that's why it isn't that great.

Oh, thanks for the comments people, thank you all. I'll try and finish this soon so you can read the rest

Good song, and i'm pretty sure it's spelt morpheine.

Well, you can be agnostic leaning towards athiest, how do i know this? i am agnostic leaning towards athiest. Hurry up and post more hunter!